Hi again Greg.
I've been incorporating your suggestions into my snatch over the past few weeks, and here is a link to my snatch one month after the above video was taken. (Looking back, I had forgotten just how bad my arm bending was!)
I'm feeling nitpicky about my arms not being dead straight when the bar reaches my hip pocket. I have read that a *slight* arm bend is acceptable, but at my neophyte stage I'd feel better about my arms being totally straight.
What are your thoughts about my improvements? Are there any serious concerns at this point?